New instrumental track from me... Thoughts?

[negative theory]

I just finished mixing this one and I dig it, so I figured I'd see what others thought. It's instrumental rock, on the heavier side.

 

[Mudloop]

I think this sounds great. It reminds me of the Pixies for some reason (their older stuff). Not sure if that's an influence at all.

 

[negative theory]

I think this sounds great. It reminds me of the Pixies for some reason (their older stuff). Not sure if that's an influence at all.

Interesting. I've never actually listened to them. I'll have to look into their older stuff. Thanks!

 

[filmtex]

Cool recording. Nice job, I liked the mix.

 

[negative theory]

I've been spending a lot of time working on mixes, it's nice to hear that it sounds good to other people. haha...

 

[MonetBass]

Nice job. Suggestion: Add a more melodic lead guitar line to keep the listener's attention. I dig the vibe and groove, though.

 

[saabfender]

Needs more of a tune. That phrase repeated endlessly isn't enough with no variation isn't doing it.

 

[BassAndReeds]

I would definitely consider working with a lead guitar player. I feel I’m missing that. All parts sound good though.

 

[negative theory]

Thanks for checking out the tune and taking the time to respond.

I can see the need for a more melodic lead. This is my first foray into writing, arranging, and recording on my own. I've been in bands for years, so it's a little different to shift gears and do it all.